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Aprender
Junior Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-07-09 11:10 PM

From the first glimpse,
She was all I wanted
From the first glimpse,
I wanted to hold her,
To lover her,
To dance with her long into the night
All, from the first glimpse
The first thing I noticed was her incredible beauty,
Then her striking personality
From the first glimpse,
We've been friends, but nothing more
What I want, is for that to change
My initial feeling for her to be mine, has resurfaced
And she's all I think about,
Day and night
Won't she be mine?
With all my wishing and hoping,
She still won't recognize my love for her
But I'll always remember
My first glimpse

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-09 11:24 PM

wonderful job, Aprender. I enjoyed this a lot.

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*Krista Knutson*

Delilah
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 36
The Wonderful America

2 posted 1999-07-10 12:18 PM

You should let her know.

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Delilah
:)
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"I think, therefore I am."
-Rene Descartes

Joshua
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

3 posted 1999-07-10 09:13 PM

You have a wonderful way with words.
This is extrordenary!

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal te experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*

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