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Seeking77
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since 1999-07-09
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Irvine california

0 posted 1999-07-09 09:42 PM


Does she really love him?
Enough to go that far..I guess that means he loves her
Or is it just her heart?
We often think we found the one...why can't he only wait?
Does she need protection...will this ever work?
He told her that it would
Too late now...they must have been in love

Does she need a test?
she hasn't hit her date
She is going to see the Doctor
what will he say?

Does she have her lover with her?
No, he had to stay
He's sitting there at home
Days go by...
Waiting for the call
Now the phone is ringing

Does she dare to answer?
What will the Doctor say?
Nine months pass and the baby's on it's way

It's a boy...she's giving him away.


Does she really love him?
Not enough to wait.



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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-09 10:43 PM


A sad tale that is all too real these days....nicely done, Seeking77.

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*Krista Knutson*

Seeking77
Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 24
Irvine california
2 posted 1999-07-09 11:26 PM


Thank you for your reply...this poem was really easy to write about, and that's unfortunate but hopefully someone will read it and think it over.

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JeNn AnNe >:)

Joshua
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa
3 posted 1999-07-10 08:18 PM


it is so sad that the poem is all to true

I beleive it was Shirley Maclain who said:
"Sex is hardly ever about sex."

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal te experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*



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