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Teen Poetry #1

Game over, you lose.

HerLoss
New Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 5
Westminster, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-07-09 04:48 PM

You were the one for me

You were my destiny

I loved you more than life itself

I prioritized you over everyone else

It's too bad you never understood

That I loved you as much as I could

I talked about you night and day

Too bad all those feelings have gone away

All I wanted was to feel your warm embrace

And gaze at your pretty face

I waited for you at my hands and knees

Now that I am gone you will see
Though I wanted to be with you at all cost

Our game of love just ended, and you've lost.

Darm31
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 22
westminster ca usa

1 posted 1999-07-09 04:53 PM

HerLOss,
Thats a really really good poem...the ending was extraordinary.

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