Eye To Eye TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK

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Teen Poetry #1

Eye To Eye TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK

Gedanken
Junior Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 16
New york

0 posted 1999-07-09 12:27 PM

I stand staring at you--eye to eye

My heart has the sensation if could fly

You stare back at me and to me this you send

I hold you dear to me but your just a friend

This comes to me not as a shock

As my heart falls apart like an unwound clock

I look at you and try to utter the words--why?

But all that was said-----was the sleared words of goodby

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I say to all who listens, we'll never win!!

Darm31
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 22
westminster ca usa

1 posted 1999-07-09 03:46 PM

I had to read it a few times over...but I liked it, I know exactly what you're saying...sometimes it hurts, you either have to be something or nothing at all...I feel the same thats why I wrote my poem called "REWIND" ...read it if you have a chancce.

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