|Teen Poetry #1|
|Eye To Eye TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK|
since 1999-07-04Posts 16
I stand staring at you--eye to eye
My heart has the sensation if could fly
You stare back at me and to me this you send
I hold you dear to me but your just a friend
This comes to me not as a shock
As my heart falls apart like an unwound clock
I look at you and try to utter the words--why?
But all that was said-----was the sleared words of goodby
I say to all who listens, we'll never win!!
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since 1999-07-08Posts 22
westminster ca usa
I had to read it a few times over...but I liked it, I know exactly what you're saying...sometimes it hurts, you either have to be something or nothing at all...I feel the same thats why I wrote my poem called "REWIND" ...read it if you have a chancce.
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