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LoveStruck
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since 1999-07-08
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Southwest Missouri, USA

0 posted 1999-07-08 01:40 AM


To see you I would do anything. I would dive to the deepest depths of the ocean, I would soar to the highest point on eagles' wings, only to be near you, Only to be near you, I would. Wait forever for you, and longer if I
had to. I would wait till the mountains crumpled to the sea. Until i can have you I shall roam the earth. In search of true love, although I will never find it. I will never be truely happy until your arms are around me. You have my heart, and always will. I cannot imagine my future without you by my side. You are all i think about, both day and night. You're in my thoughts, you're in my dreams.

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-08 01:44 AM


Hmm, how 'bout something like simply "You"? Just make sure whatever you pick feels good to you. Wonderful poem.

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*Krista Knutson*

Delilah
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since 1999-07-08
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The Wonderful America
2 posted 1999-07-08 01:46 AM


If i were you, I'd name it something sexy, like "Desire". Just a thought. Great poem. Avoid using cliches, though.

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Delilah
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