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Teen Poetry #1

what shall i do?

Zombie Man
Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 52
Va

0 posted 1999-07-07 06:11 PM

Lately my mind has gone blank.
I don't know what to do.
I can't make decisions for myself.
In this life I have sank to the bottom.
What is wrong with me?
Why does it effect us?
People just control my life.
All I do is what they say.
While my heart is full of pain.
My head is full hate.
Now I have a choice to keep this hell.
Or start a new life.
And should close friends help,
I can overcome this pain from hell.
If they decided not to help,
I shall have to try myself.
Without any help from others
If that yime of hope doesn't comes,
then what shall i do?

Delilah
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 36
The Wonderful America

1 posted 1999-07-08 01:12 AM

I really don't understand your poem at all. It just doesn't make sense. The only thing I got was that you were in pain. I'm sorry for that.

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Delilah
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