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bucky
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since 1999-07-07
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falmoth,mass usa

0 posted 1999-07-07 09:02 AM


greed
its in all of us
you cant get rid of it
some people say they dont have it
deep down they do
you cant stop it

© Copyright 1999 bucky - All Rights Reserved
habeebpetersen@hotmail
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 28
falmouth MA usa
1 posted 1999-07-07 09:06 AM


i know you bucky but you dont know who i am your poem was all right but you might need a little help from the expert habeeb.

habeebpetersen@hotmail
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falmouth MA usa
2 posted 1999-07-07 09:18 AM





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-07-99).]

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 1999-07-07 08:45 PM


With a little work, Bucky - You'll be a terrific poet......

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