Teen Poetry #1 |
greed |
bucky New Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 9falmoth,mass usa |
greed its in all of us you cant get rid of it some people say they dont have it deep down they do you cant stop it |
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habeebpetersen@hotmail Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 28falmouth MA usa |
i know you bucky but you dont know who i am your poem was all right but you might need a little help from the expert habeeb. |
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habeebpetersen@hotmail Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 28falmouth MA usa |
[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-07-99).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
With a little work, Bucky - You'll be a terrific poet...... |
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