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Untitled #5

StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-20 04:32 PM

The battlelines are drawn.
The opponents engaged.
Strong words were your weapons:
Insensitivity,
my heart was hid behind
My counter-offensive
struck deep within your heart,
and deep within my soul.

Trodding on the borders
between our love and hate.
Unbridled passion clashed,
This conflict was our fate.
A war of wills, not fists
The victor reigns supreme.
Unchallenged by the lost
combatant slain unseen.

No winner in this game,
a clash between our hearts.
Where winners fall of guilt
and losers are torn apart.
But in this conflict lies,
pursuit and a retreat.
For in these fallen hearts
lies our souls' defeat.

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"Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-09-20 05:11 PM

wow....the way you write i think maybe you and i have had similar experiences.......
go figure

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

2 posted 1999-09-20 11:08 PM

What can i say..you are just really good.

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