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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
I sit alone in loneliness. No one to hear my cry. No one to care. No one to help me through the pain. I sit alone in darkness. No one to see the tears run down my face. No one to see the pain in my eyes. No one to see my helplessness. I sit alone in helplessness. No one to help me stand. No one to hold my hand. No one to mend my heart. I lie alone in death. No one to mourn my departure. No one to speak well of me. No one........ ------------------ "Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin. |
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Nici Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 22Hastings, New Zealand |
WOW....I'm speechless, what can I say. That was great. You touched some feelings that I have felt myself. Theres always some there even though sometimes we think there isn't...... Anyway, your poem was really good(want for a better word) --------------------------------------------- "All our dreams may come true if we have the courage to pursue them." |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
You see, I only wish that were true for me..... If it was I could escape the hell of living guiltlessly "I hate myself and want to die" -Kurt Cobain- |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I know the feeling I've been there. You've just worded it so good. There really is no word that i can think of that is good enough to compliment your poetry. You are a real good poet. |
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