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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-09-19 02:35 PM


What does love feel like?
To me its my head aching,
love is your heart breaking.
What does love feel like?
To me its always crying,
love is almost dying.
What does love feel like?
It feels like u want to die,
if they ever go u start to cry.
These feelings I wrote,
dont sound like love to you,
but maybe you've never been in love,
a love that is so true.

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-09-19 02:39 PM


the concept is good...but just a little advice...stay away from the whole thing where you used die, cry...twice...it got repetitive....but i liked the idea

-only God is perfect
And God doesn't exist in my world,
therefore I don't believe in perfection-
just a belief of mine

Lauren
Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 21
FORT PIERCE ,FL
2 posted 1999-09-26 04:46 PM


i liked this poem and thought it was really good cause i can relate to it....cant wait to see some of your other poems
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-13 07:32 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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