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David Generous
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since 2000-12-15
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0 posted 2001-01-01 09:49 PM


Sometimes things seem OK, Then change so fast....
Not sure where to go from here, Feel like I’m dying so fast..
Wondering how long my life will really last..
I wish that she was here with me, my feelings are so true..
Will I have that chance to be lost in her arms when I’m blue.
I’m afraid I won’t see her again, I need her more than anything...

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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669
Michigan, US
1 posted 2001-01-02 01:24 AM


Your poetry will receive considerably more attention in a Poetry forum, rather than in a Discussion forum like Feelings. I don't really know which of the Poetry forums you would prefer, so rather than move this to one, I'll suggest you repost it in one of your own choice.
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