I Dread the Thought of Being Alone

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I Dread the Thought of Being Alone

PartiStarks
Junior Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 38
Brooklyn, NY

0 posted 1999-07-31 12:45 PM

An internal emptiness blakens my heart
For external loneliness is where the complexity starts
Fears of eternal seclusion shares a large part
of why I Dread the Thought of Being Alone
No ear to listen nor shoulder to cry
An overwhelming feeling that hurts deep down inside
No one to respond to my question, "Why?"
I Dread the Though of Being Alone
No funny face smiling upon my arrival at home
No tender embrace or any love being shown
It's like walking into darkness or into a place of the unknown
I Dread the Thought of Being Alone

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pandora
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 184

1 posted 1999-08-09 06:21 PM

I just couldn't leave this emotive poem of yours sitting here all alone without any responses. As far as the content of your poem, yeah, it really sucks sometimes to be alone. Other times, I like it a lot. Why don't you post this in Open Poetry?

PartiStarks
Junior Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 38
Brooklyn, NY

2 posted 1999-08-10 02:24 AM

I have posted it in crytical analysis and I got some pretty encouraging responses.

Thanks for your support.

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PartiStarks
Junior Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 38
Brooklyn, NY

3 posted 1999-08-10 02:25 AM

I have posted it in crytical analysis and I got some pretty encouraging responses.

Thanks for your support.

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Lynx
New Member

since 1999-08-08

Posts 3
Monterey, TN USA

4 posted 1999-08-13 06:36 PM

Pets can keep you from feeling alone.

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