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m48
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0 posted 2009-12-03 07:42 PM


hello all could some more people please take a look at some of my work? im fairly new and i would like some feedback asap. PLEASE!
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1 posted 2009-12-03 08:42 PM

Hi and welcome ~

Where did you post your poems?  The best way to receive feedback is to take the time and enjoy other's poetry too.  When you provide feedback, you tend to receive it.  So, let us know where you have posted - and jump in and read and write and enjoy.

Again, welcome to PiP.



Alison
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2 posted 2009-12-05 07:28 PM

I agree, When i first started writing here even ever i posted a topic i always read and gave advice and commented on others work at the same time. It helps others and you'd be surprised at how many people comment and advise what you right too.
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