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Talyn
Junior Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 47
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2008-03-09 06:32 PM



I realize that life doesnt guarnatee anything.

I dont fully believe in just hope alone.

I cant believe a religion because it is souly based upon it.

I need foundation,

Something to prove it is there.

Even though, it might not always be there.

With what has happen in my life,

and what our society does,

is make everything,

come down,

to a dollar.

You dont have to be rich,

nor poor,

to see it.

Talyn

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wisdomofthesword
Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
1 posted 2008-03-10 03:26 AM


so true mate. nice write

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2008-04-20 05:17 PM


I'm so sorry for your anguish.  It's nice you can get your feelings inked as I feel it helps heal our wounds.

My late son used to say, without darkness, we can't appreciate light, without thirst, a cool refreshing drink, and without sadness, the happiness in life.

None of us want the darkness, hunger, sadness or thirst, but they do precede the wonders of satisfaction.

May you be blest with satisfaction.

   Rae

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