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Autumn senryus
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Autumn senryus |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Palms reaching upward supplicating, begging us love me as I am! Red and gold castings, leaves of yesterday falling down to Earth, in love. Feel the chill in bones seek the warmth of lover's touch, renewal of life. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
in supplication we lift our eyes to heaven He knows of our needs Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Superbly penned senryus! Each one is a memorable vignette! The vivid imagery and the emotions that your words evoked, made this post a captivating and memorable reading!  Love & Nature's Light, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Love you both, 'loper and Linda, for your kindest replies! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
"Palms reaching upward supplicating, begging us love me as I am!" Great stuff there lovely lady! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
these are awesome Kacy! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy...your autumn is color and touch...lovely! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you speak autumn so beautifully Kacy... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written and expressed hugs Lee J. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written and expressed hugs Lee J. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Autumn comes alive in your words, thank you... Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
These are beautiful!  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
This season is indeed the most intrinsically affected by potent emotions. These days it's most true; I feel them copiously. Your words are supple. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fall is such a lovely inspiration...  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply superb!..... and about my favorite season as well... [it's essence...and the possitive aspects of love's effect...captured perfectly!] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
These are beautiful, Kacy. Huggies,  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
since a 'comment' posting bumped this 'write' back up the queue to page 1 ....I happened to read it again....I feel the need to add the following to my original comment: This is a simply wonderful ‘write’....... It’s all there: love lost.... new, true 'selfless' love found [‘everyperson’ dejavu......a fine synopsis of all our lives and loves!]....in lines such as: love me as I am! leaves of yesterday falling ............ in love. the warmth of lover's touch, renewal of life. grand applause!! |
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