Open Poetry #37 |
Flower |
miabug Member
since 2006-04-19
Posts 59Canada |
Flower In your hands, a Flower A Display of wonder Little, shy and insecure With a heart so warm and pure In your hands, a teardrop A Flower’s dying crop Insanity, infinity Impossible to be In your hands, a caress A Flower’s repaired mess Gentle patience, understanding A Flower starts to sing 20 avril 2006 - by Marie-Ève C. Mia Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is pretty |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
a singing flower, playing a tune now that is a good one a poet who cares |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
In loving hands I would expect nothing less than miracles miabug. I love to hear the flowers when they sing! :-) |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: beautiful! Such a sweet and tender melody! I hear a lotus singing. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This made me smile as I picked your number for the challenge and I love flowers. Hope you like me continuation of it. /pip/Forum94/HTML/003161.html |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"A Flower starts to sing" Perfectly beautiful miabug. I have heard flowers sing early in the morning when the dew fills their hearts. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mia, Not many people know that flowers sing. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Lovely -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a delicate poem! I loved it. |
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backtash123 Junior Member
since 2006-04-22
Posts 46 |
This poem was short and sweet. It expressed to me with innocense of my childhood what a flower is. I loved this, because it speaks to itself first, and the reader reads it understanding what they like. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful in its fragility... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is so lovely Marie-Ève. Enjoyed so very much. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Very nice ! paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely!! |
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Les Gartner Junior Member
since 2006-04-10
Posts 37MD |
Very pretty and very charming. A lovely poem. Les |
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