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You Are Hawk ... I Am Sky
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You Are Hawk ... I Am Sky |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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You Are Hawk ... I Am Sky ~*Marge Tindal*~ You are Hawk … I am Sky Soar me feathered, strong Ascend the currents of my lift adrift along the path of watch Protector eye, vision from sky know thy slated missions well Flight attend on wayward wind gliding ever so gracefully along Seeking, soaring, watchful one as there is a great need of such Follow those within your care that dare to await your watch Knowing surely as they do their safe-keep depends always on you~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smiling and nodding a 'well done' at you dear lady! A most excellent feast for my eyes, mind and spirit. Love ya lady~ Nancy In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. An invincible summer. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....May I fly in your sky?  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, beautiful ladies and FRIENDS~ Both of you hold a special place in my sky~ I penned this one for ED ... he knows the 'why' of my 'why'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
This is a beautiful poem indeed! Great job! Ame et Poésie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This so captured my imagination and I could see hawks soaring while I read it, just as they do around here! You have written an exquisite piece! Love Betty Lou |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie girl~ This is indeed one of your most finest, I was captivated by this and felt my butterfly wings soaring along with you - thanks for the fine flight, this beautiful morn sweet Marge. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge this is a very inspiring poem and up-lifted me. Hugs Kim |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
yeah i agree with that! i felt the flow of energy in there, drives me high with every lines c",) love it! psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Um hmmm... yes.. this poem soars and took me with it. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This flows very well...like the flight of the hawk within a peaceful blue sky.  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Loved this! - Owl (an owl who is not afraid of hawks) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes he flies because he knows there is that eternal need to watch and watch and watch, on guard....and sometimes he flies because he's hungry.....but always, he flies. Thank you for the sharing, dear lady....I needed to see this very poem, this very morning. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
beautiful marriage of skies and freedom aye White Gold Wielder |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The beauty and wisdom of native blood flowed so beautifully from your spirit quill. Hugs with love, EO |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Folks~ I do appreciate each kind reply~ Ed~ quote:Sometimes when we least expect it ... the words circle, bringing thoughts of one who is dear to many~ Thusly, it is so with this one for you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your truly special marge  My spirit will rise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
As usual, a gem you've penned dear Marge! love it! (((hugs)) Charisma |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I once said to myself i'd be a bird when i die so i could soar through the sky |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I do thank you all ... when feathered words come to rest in the inking nest of this heart ... they are gently caressed then set free to soar to the poetic nest of the intended~ I am blessed with the friendship of Hawk ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
After all my expeditions with camera in hand... you've just proven that photographs aren't necessary when a poet writes words that let you see *S* Beautiful work!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Suthern took the words out of my mouth. She said it all. Hugs, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
I liked it(alot).............paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthern~ You *smile* me ... and as God is my witness ... as I sat the patio just moments ago ... here he came ... knowiing ... the gigantic Red Tail ... three graceful swooping passes ... knowing ... just knowing~ Thank you also Titia ... I am blessed by the friendships of you both~ Paul ... thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Marge, I nearly missed this and I would have been heartbroken. Seeking, soaring, watchful one as there is a great need of such May we all be watched over by The Hawk. It rings true to me this day and special prayers go up for someone dear who is in need. huggles, Marti "God has put me on this earth |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Marge, I don't say the name that was given to me....to describe what I am on the "other side"....but I can tell you it translates to "Spirit of the air".... Just thought you'd like to know that. You have a good eye, dear lady, a good eye. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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wvatvrider Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 78West Virginia,USA |
I love the outdoors Marge and it is grand when I can soar outside even when I am in the warmth of my home Danny |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Knowing surely as they do their safe-keep depends always on you~" Beautiful!! JL  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed Marge...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Forgot to library this... *S* |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
The vision you have etched is beautiful Marge. Enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I swear, you all are just too, too good to this poet~ To be *gifted* words is my delight ... to know they come freely as Spirits of the Air is such a blessing to me ... what have I better to do ... than share them with some of the nicest folks I know~ It is another wonderful day to be a poet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ |
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troubadour Junior Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 43in the land of yore |
Enjoyed this uplifting write (and will check out your website). t |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is beautiful & especially close to me since I feel the hawk is one of my totems. They are so awesome. Love ya, Betty |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
such a precious read Margie, thank you |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"It is another wonderful day to be a poet~" Indeed it is...for all the reasons you said, and some you didn't. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Marge, a wonderful write my friend, lifted my spirits high. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Smooth Marge....real smooth! INclan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Because sometimes a birthday 'ray of light' circles to find someone who blesses so many others with his caring~ Happy Birthday, Ed~ May the freckle-monster be kind to you~  Big ole Birth-of-day *HUGLETS* to you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for bringing this back up I'm glad i didn't miss it |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad you brought this back up. *S* For someone needs to soar... and he'll get more freckles up high, right? *G* Of course... my freckles are becoming age spots. *grimace* But he's made of sterner stuff... and feathers give protection as well as flight. *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I blessed you for this then, and I bless you doubly for it now.....today I fly, and hawk I am....I must, for the sky should not be bare, whatever winds may come. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hello... Marge! Thanks for remembering me. Yes, it's been a long time. As usual reading your poetry inspires me so maybe I'll post something again soon. Your poem is interesting and lovely. Take care! Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I am soooo blessed with the friendship of the Hawk ... Deb ... thanks for dropping in for a visit and I'll be looking for a new post from you REAL SOON !!! I love reaching out through the archives and bringing a member back ~'home'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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