Open Poetry #34 |
Strange... |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strange…. Someone knocks on my window though no one is there, Then I hear of trouble, and send a little prayer, as chimes begin ringing, but lo, there is no wind… so it must be that a miracle is passing on again… Strange that so many are lost in their belief when it’s the simple things that bring so much relief; Does one need a hairshirt? or just folded hands in prayer? Or know their thoughts are flying, because He is waiting there… Strange, how such a quiet moment in solitude can bring the feeling of the miracles as chimes begin to ring. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The grass is always greenest........under our feet. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, you can actually feel the miracles happening.. Lovely Karilea.. Heart hugs~ Season's Greetings! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
So much of the good things in life depend on faith. Too much good cannot be said about it. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Much truth to these words SunOne...you have said it well. Happy Holidays dear one. |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Sunshine, believing creates miracles. Your words are lovely. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, Karilea...the thoughts as well as the poem. Hugs, Ethel |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
It is when we are silent that we hear the most.... Super Sis!! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
It is a spirit Outside your casement, that knocks Begging, but silent * He asks, is given, he takes, And passes on your message. Again, Thanks for letting me pass on your message...(poem) and I did enjoy this one..... __________ice/ford ><> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
miracles in the simple things - yes- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, those chimes do stimulate such a mood of reflection and miracle...... Nicely done and let me be the first to ask......What's a "hairshirt"? Just me I guess...... Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Strange that so many are lost in their belief when it’s the simple things that bring so much relief; Does one need a hairshirt? or just folded hands in prayer? Yes, dear one, very strange written with awareness and profound feelings |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes, the silence brings so much with it lady...you know how I feel about that. Hugs you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful Kari... from time to time, even I hear the chimes. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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