Open Poetry #34 |
Harvey |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
I have a good friend who thinks you’re stupid that any woman who believes in the things you do is void of reason or just not there Sometimes I can feel him roll his eyes He notes you’re rather wide He wonders why I waste my time— We argue every day |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
good for you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Freedom of choice...a desire of love and equality...driving forces for that which we want...as we let the door close behind us...and say "Ciao"... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes -- seems we do have some parallels....and you write this painful one so well... Another unwanted parallel for us may be that this poem got TWO (?????) replies -- PiP utterly mystifies me sometimes! Well, I'll start the process of making amends right here, right now..... some of your poetry is going to be a book some day if it isn't already....and I want to be able to say I read it first. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Don't think I'd stay friendly with a guy like Harvey! Excellent write. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
It pays to argue with that friend but remember you are the CEO and you have to win over that voice with positive input. marty |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
oh, what can I say? "I"... tattletale. "You"....why so quiet? "he"...rude. read. |
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