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Carol123 New Member
since 2004-10-11
Posts 6 |
Deep within my soul a passion waits for release Buried under the burden of trials walled behind the pain of broken relationships Conscious and unconscious limitations I have placed on myself. Ah… but now a stirring a spark that longs to be kindled a desire that has stoked the fire in my soul Mere mediocrity will no longer satisfy the passion consumes every fiber true realization that I was created for more immeasurably more than my mind can fathom A new path revealed I set my feet, hands, heart and soul on an unmarked journey listening intently to the voice of my Creator |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome dear Carol! A very beautiful first entry! Uplifting too, as you acquire awareness of your worth and beauty. Love, Margherita  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this and all it had to say - well done. Welcome to this wonderful world of blue - I think you'll enjoy it here - susanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Carol...I'm certainly going to enjoy your pennings! Welcome to Passions! I get the feeling you've been sitting back, watching, reading, getting ready for the big jump into the blue... And what a splash you've made! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Carol! I very much enjoyed your entrance post. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Welcome, Carol and thank you for such a lovely first post. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful poem Carol... Welcome to Passions!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...welcome...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions! |
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Carol123 New Member
since 2004-10-11
Posts 6 |
Thank you all for such a warm welcome!!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Carol! Welcome. It's exciting to see you finally posted your writing. I love this it shows the passion you feel for life and your ability to carry on. Welcome and I hope you like it here half as much as I have. Here's to many more posts.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this is the kind of positive poetry that women need to read, as there is definitely a better place than alone. Nice work, and welcome to Passions. Example is not the main thing in influencing others, it is the only thing. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Welcome to this leg of that journey. Hope you enjoy the trip! sag |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Hi Carol- This poem is very beautiful. I enjoyed it very much! -Kellie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Carol: So glad to welcome you to PIP. Your poem is exciting to read, knowing you are embarking on a new adventure! I hope the road is smooth and pleasant for you! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed , turning negatives into positives Welome to Pip Hope |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
WELCOME !!!!! . . . Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Awesome poetry! I'm glad Larry brought you here. A friend of his is a friend of mine... and I can see already I'll enjoy your words. God bless you...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A new path revealed I set my feet, hands, heart and soul on an unmarked journey listening intently to the voice of my Creator **************** And there lies the one answer that fits so many questions. A wonderful contribution to these forums and a pure joy to read. One of the most challenging (at least for me LOL ) things about free verse is the line breaks, but yours are right on an read perfectly. They give that pause or emphasis in just the right places and that makes for good poetry. Welcome to Passions and a cudos to Larry for bringing you to these blue pages. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful and uplifting first post. Welcome to this home of blue and thank you Larry for bringing us such a wonderful talent. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Welcome, looking forward to more of your poems Tremendous write |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome! I liked this very much. Susan C. (just too many Susan's) "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to Passions, I'm sure you will find much inspiration and friendship amoung these blue pages |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Carol123 Welcome, well done and looking for more. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Carol, welcome to these passionate blue pages. And thanks to Larry for inviting you! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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