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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Crystal ball tells all future days; contorted faces through veiled mists drummed up by witches brew stirring echoes of harvest moon chanting to night time skies calling forth spirits unseen to blind eyes feel the burn of yearn to know... the unknown walk with me into these dark edges of reality and listen to the screaming within my mind.. (oh jeez...I do hope this poet will forgive me for attempting to do them justice with this...begging forgiveness here....  )The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, you have really risen to meet Wranx's masquerade challeng with all these wonderful poems you have been writing. I have been thoroughly appreciating your versatility as a writer! Love to you! Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, you really are inspired! Methinks I see our good goddess witch one in this? Donna, you win the prize in my eyes, for the #1 poet honoring your fellow Passionate Pipsters. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks to both of you... lol at Kacy...ok...I PROMISE I won't do anymore.....but darn it sure is fun trying... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is definitely a veryserene poem... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i see suzie and a round of applause whomever it is, because you've written it materfully |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I see Susie here as well You must have a closet full of costumes! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ok...before everyone guesses that this is Suzie, I will say I would never even attempt to try to imitate her...lol...I have written with her and just keeping up with her is a task, let alone write like her!! Told ya, I knew I wasn't going to nail this one ..... shakin the cobwebs from my mind now.....jeezz.... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
it sounds like it a bit o' the Big Easy to me . . . *grin* *shutting Donna's mouth with that nonsense up there, sheesh* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Whoever it be, Donna - you did beautifully.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suzie  thanks hon.Thank you much Susan, you are so appreciated. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
for those of you who guessed Karen you were right! Thank you and Karen, thank you for inspiring! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are simply one of the sweetest ladies there be! Thank you, Donna, and,  I do believe ya NAILED me!   Yer a doll, my friend. Thanks so much for the honor. |
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