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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-10-26 01:37 PM


It is a choice that you make
to do or not to do-
is up to you
but it's your right;
only you can chose
to step up
and cast your vote
or step aside and see
what will be.
You have that choice
because you are free
but when the other guy prevails...
don't come complaining to me!  

(my apologies to this poet for attempting to be as good as this as they are!)

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

© Copyright 2004 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-10-26 01:47 PM


Wow, Donna, you are on a roll!
Whoever this be, I agree.

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
2 posted 2004-10-26 01:53 PM


oh, is it Midnitesun you mask???
Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-10-26 01:53 PM


I know!  I know!
littlewing
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4 posted 2004-10-26 02:55 PM


ahaha OMG I dont know . . .
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-10-26 03:09 PM


*Laffin* I'm not telling...  
I will say this though, I could never quite capture the style, but perhaps, the theme....

thanks ya'll!!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-10-26 03:47 PM


hmmm...is it Noah?
Midnitesun
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7 posted 2004-10-26 04:21 PM


LOL, I think of Noah too by the thoughts presented, though his style is
inimitable.

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8 posted 2004-10-26 04:23 PM


it looks more like Midnitesun

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2004-10-26 06:10 PM


I would guess Kacy...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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10 posted 2004-10-26 07:19 PM


I would say Kacy as well....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
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Aenimal
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11 posted 2004-10-26 07:24 PM


im with the rest, kacy no?
GG
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12 posted 2004-10-26 07:25 PM


Definitely Midnitesun...
well done!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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13 posted 2004-10-26 07:33 PM


LOL, I DO NOT guess me, but SHRUGGING here,  maybe Raphie or Noah, though Noah's would be LONGER and more elaborate than this, LOL.
If me? I'd say the thoughts are on target.
If not, that person makes a lot of sense.

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2004-10-26 07:46 PM


ahh Kacy, please forgive me hon cuz I knew when I did this I would NEVER get a proper form but I also knew content and theme alone would point to you....and there was definately no fooling this crowd!  
Yep, ya'll got it correct, it is the one and only MIDNITESUN!  

Forgive me Kacy??  Your a sweetheart, thank you for giving me the chance to stretch my wings a bit here!  

Thanks to all for your guesses!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

wranx
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15 posted 2004-10-26 09:43 PM


Ohhh, I think you got it close enough.
Just look at the guesses..LOL


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16 posted 2004-10-26 10:13 PM


LOL, I decided to take a break from filling out my....ahem...ballot...to come back to the board room. LOL.  
It's an honor Donna, to have you write this piece, as I could have easily said those exact words, maybe already have. LOL.
Thanks sweetie!

Gentle Spirit
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17 posted 2004-10-27 09:20 AM


lol....Kacy I COULD hear you saying those words thats why the theme (minus the style) came across to me so easily.  Am glad you enjoyed my little tribute to your talents!  And TALENTED you are sweet lady pal!  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-10-27 11:14 AM


I must admit that I did read the other replies before writing this one ~ but it was Kacy that came to my mind as well.

I am very impressed with all these wonderful poems that you are gifting us with! You are one prolific poetess ~ and so versatile!!!

Hugs with love,
Linda

littlewing
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19 posted 2004-10-27 12:20 PM


you definitely got her spirit here, Donna.
Beautiful job . . .

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