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Masquerade (Wranx's Challenge)
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Masquerade (Wranx's Challenge) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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My soul, stark, white on beige on black stares back at me, blank I sigh as I hear the siren singing just for me and this your mirrored image cracking, blending with my own shards of us both dive deep into my pocket Saved for another day of wonder ---------------------------------------- /pip/Forum7/HTML/000633.html |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OH, this is way too cool  some people just stick to your heart and mind like they were made of velcro, heh, and you can never toss them away (and if this be who I think it is, he writes words that strike like lightning) I came back for another read, and discovered another whose mask this could be. (and she IS lightning, LOL) [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-24-2004 11:05 PM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Well done-  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hey SUE this is amazing your talent indeed compliments! ~~*~~ Read between the lines look deep into each word and you will understand the depth of my soul (GE) ~~**~~ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nice writing Sue, and nice to read you again. Jason |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I'm loving all these Masquerade poems. Fantastic Sue! Maree and I am haunted |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
beautiful beautiful.... but looks like a Maree mask to me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes I see maree prints too... (doesn't she have a nice arch to the foot?) nice nice nice even in the shade of blue *blowin' kisses* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(nodding).. I'd have to agree with Muted as well... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks guys, as you know this is difficult to try to even attempt to wear someone else's mask. Thanks for reading and goodness, my apologies to the poet.  thank you |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A beauty Susie I didn't know you could speak Australian Fun, isn't it? To look out of someone elses eyes for a bit. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this felt like it was scribed especially for me.... dive deep into my pocket, saved for another day of wonder... Sighs... tremendous write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh I too see Maree in this....very much.... Very well done Susie... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Incredible .... perfection. No doubt here! Love, Margherita |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Suzie, you done a lovely but it's strange I see Bri behind this mask and I wonder why? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so much everyone I tried . . . so happy you guys could see who I was honoring. LMAO @ Ed and Karen up there . . . Sharon? I think it is the message maybe. Thank you again and Ed, thank you this is so much fun. Maree? I hope you like. Thanks guys. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Sue, I love it!...thank you so very very much. I read and wondered, (imagine if I was wrong lol, there'd be sumpin to worry bout eh?) ya did good! really good!  Mxx and I am haunted by my illicit exquisite dream but I can't really wake up so I just drift in between ~ani difranco~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you are so welcome, Maree the pleasure was mine, and it would take me a very long time to learn Australian! *smile* Thanks everyone! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cool...it was Maree! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
loved this, little wing! love&light, **babygirl** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent job in capturing maree's essence |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You even got her line breaks just so... amazing job, this... amazing you! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks guys, and Maree and Ed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YESE, it IS the Aussie lightning bolt you chose. She is so awesome! YOU are so awesome, and this is an outstanding example of your versatility and poetic heart's insight.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you are so sweet Kacy The kudos goes to Maree. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You do AUSTRALIAN really well lol I'm truly honoured Sue. Midnite? "the aussie lightning bolt"? lol......I lerrve it. and I am haunted by my illicit exquisite dream but I can't really wake up so I just drift in between ~ani difranco~ |
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