Open Poetry #32 |
Sonnet chain |
eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Part of a challenge /pip/Forum7/HTML/000614.html “Beauty is truth, truth beauty,”-that is all that this one man will let go, but onto him a great burden will be placed upon that small frame. Reach, reach out into the great be- yond and find your time young man, it’s out there! The lamb’s skin of the drum beats rhythm out- The river inside the stylus listens- The tree’s skin takes each and every beat in- Performing a symphony on a page. And this blank place is where my fingers moved to that symphony created by each movement of the wrist, hand, fingers and eyes. But the symphony can no longer be heard by my ears, it has faded away. "So what befalls the flawless? Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me." |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I like this especially the part about the river in the stylus and the tree's skin - very creative |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So introspective and read as a whispered chant. Nice write. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed the creativity in this one! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...awesome! |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Thanks!!!! "So what befalls the flawless? |
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