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Whenever, Wherever (Kaoru's Challenge)
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Whenever, Wherever (Kaoru's Challenge) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Here's my emotional poetic response to the beautiful, graceful, artist who inspired me to start writing songs, whose beautiful love song is my favorite!  ) Whenever, Wherever By: Noah Eaton 9/28/03 Lucky we can dream, so I can go any distance just to feel you Know every tear and eyelash That reveals every single blessing from you You give me the courage To climb over any mountain range And when I chart the constellations of your freckles There's so much I see inside you everyday... I can feel your lips spilling a fountain of kyries Blowing kisses across deserts and seas The mountains of love are not in your breasts It's in that grace that lies far underneath And when I see you running barefoot on the meadows With your hips shaking the ultimate melody of life I know for sure God is smiling Watching His tiny dancer rattle and hum in the sunshine No equator, no prime meridian Can seperate this world we share Your heart is my compass rose For you, I'll crawl through the mud and take some dares Here there's no nations, no mare clausum My gift to you is the whole world, baby In the air, underwater, on land or underground You'll always be sexy and lovely to me... Whenever, wherever Up above and down under We'll both be here and there Making sweet love everywhere No desert is too dry, no ocean is too wide When you'll always be living, melting in my eyes Because love is patient, love is kind You are my song from God, you are heaven's rhyme Come on world, and spread your love Show the world it is for real Love, you have me down at your feet You know just how I feel... "Whenever, wherever We're meant to be together You'll be there and I'll be here And that's the deal, my dear!"  I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-29-2003 12:29 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah: what a beautiful tribute and a challenge well met I adore these lines: I know for sure God is smiling Watching His tiny dancer rattle and hum in the sunshine beautiful xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Very well done!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is wonderful, lil brother, and full of passion...you have put a melody in my head this morning...and it's a love song!!! Excellent write...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you sure know how to write them... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Whenever, wherever Up above and down under We'll both be here and there Making sweet love everywhere No desert is too dry, no ocean is too wide When you'll always be living, melting in my eyes Because love is patient, love is kind You are my song from God, you are heaven's rhyme Noah, this is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs  Ethel |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
wonderful! my fave: "You are my song from God, you are heaven's rhyme" to be rythmically and harmonically in sync with the Divine. Wow, she takes you there. good write Peace, Joe |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I can feel your lips spilling a fountain of kyries Blowing kisses across deserts and seas This is such a great line. you are truly talented, and this is definatley standing up to the challenge. Great Job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful Noah! She sure is a talented artist. I'd say challenge well met! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 Passionate, heart embracing write, Shakira would be humbled my friend. You truly made me FEEL what you feel for this song, for this artist. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
No desert is too dry, no ocean is too wide When you'll always be living, melting in my eyes I am speechless, and that my friend, is a great and wondrous accomplishment on your part. Smiles and hugs WOW..... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Yeah, I can see him smiling right now... Noah, another amazing tribute! No one does them like you! Wonderful Noah! Richy |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely penned and presented,,, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Noah you might be just too much of a lover for any one woman!! One of the best romantic poets I've ever read! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
dang Noah  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (10-01-2003 11:51 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, this is a beautiful work from your heart, my friend....much enjoyed! |
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