Open Poetry #29 |
Hollow Hills |
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I often, Without a notion of why, Stumble into the echoes Of the secret, hollow hills Nestled deep inside pallor Of sparkling stars of death. It's a twist of unbidden Pleasure Soft and silent Measure Twixt and tween wary Goose flesh. The melody of breaths Of song Hypnotize any swept in visitor "Fill us...your soul is the quench For nothing But empty hunger... Follow the hollow hills..." It is nothing but Eerie air That isn't there And spider webs Of drifting souls Within the hollows Of the gastly hills. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write n read,,,
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) And the stories of the hollow hills are always the ones I sympathize with the most, sweet friend, I try not to get overwhlemed with the sorrow of those stories but all the same too mnany less fortunate and lepers always come up and my heart goes out to them all! (sigh) This is a very heartfelt write, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Great expression of hollow hills! Which we've all experienced, at times. Writes, such as this brings awareness and thanksgiving for our non-hollow hills times! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was a good write.It said so much. Crystal |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks, all I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your "hollow hills" gave me "goose flesh"! Wonderful and uniquely descriptive write, Dear KoKo! EA |
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