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Over The Falls
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Over The Falls |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Our love a waterfall falling faster, stronger in shimmering rainbows; but oh, the rocks! Thanks, Kaoru! [This message has been edited by Ratleader (09-07-2003 11:49 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Ya' gots to watch out for the rocks,,, good thoughts,, |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Maybe if the lovers are careful they will miss the rocks. If their love is strong their love will survive the turmoil of lifes bumpy highway. Good jobber Bon-Bon  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed Navigating the rocks takes commitment and a sensitive watch. I hope all is well!  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This poem started while I was reading Kaoru's "A Moment Of Silence"....something about that poem brought me both the waterfall, and the rocks. /pip/Forum81/HTML/002324.html ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Just keep your hard hat on and go for it.  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
If only love CAME with a hardhat, m'friend. No pain, no gain, right? Sometimes you don't gain a thing but knowledge you swear you don't need.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I think I have become a believer in No pain.......no pain. I like this piece a lot! Thank you for sharing it. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You gotta watch the rocks, but when you come to them, work together and work it out and go right through them with ease. Crystal |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
a keeper! yep, good and bad, its worth every up and down for the rainbow that love is. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yup..sometimes the waterfall can be bumpy.. that's when you hope the barrel you're in is strong enough. Loved this one Ed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Did u order a love on the rocks. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh yes.... those darn rocks. great work Ed. M fate is not just |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful metaphor, Ed. So few words, yet what a striking visual. Excellent! Best wishes, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've always had a love for waterfalls... but just to watch... haven't ever had to consider the rocks except for their slipperiness as I stepped over them trying to get closer. *S* This magnificent metaphor makes me think of Bridalveil Falls... with all the rainbows... and so much more. *S* Excellent write, my friend... I hope all is well. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But sometimes, Ed, the rocks do make the relationship stronger..... sometimes, they crumble it..... but always, they effect it. Hugs Ethe |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
peace hon, smiles too....I know the feeling of landing on rocks....hugsssss Lauren~ The way you move me |
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