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Spirit Oath
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Spirit Oath |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Spirit Oath when the days of me become forever when the dust of me the tenuous scatter of the atoms I have been melds back into the silent mass of earth when my spirit travels through the crystal lattice of the times the places I have been wedded then with spirits I have joined in living even then I choose you if a choosing can be taken hover in our times our places feel again our loving and our love the soul of it and I will follow you into whatever lies beyond |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That is the spirit, and such a heartfelt dedication to the one you love, and all that inspires you. I especially enjoyed the simplicity that carries over. Nice~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That sure sounds like a love song to me. Very nicely penned! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Emotive and full of love. I think you have found your soul mate and the forever kind of real.  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Ed, You just opened up the tear canals again. The last one, your lady in yellow chiffon, soothed me and dried my tears. Now, here come the tears in full force. This is exquisite. Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 love this...really I do |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What an incredibly beautiful declaration of love. *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...even then I choose you... ~*~ I knew it! I knew you were a romantic at heart! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I also have may found this, and yet seek it.long years have long ups and downs. Jason |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
what a perfect way of saying beyond forever.  Thank you for directing me to this. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
What a lovely *sigh* I found tucked in among the archived pieces~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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