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Clear and Cold |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Cold and Bright Moon in winter sky Lights the night of cold darkness While stars sparkle nearby. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, the stars are like brothers and sisters to the mnoon so with the, the moon can never feel cold inside and that's why it lights up like a lantern! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Scorpio, it surely does, it surely does. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, this is very pretty. I enjoyed it... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful Scorpio... The moon casts it's spell once again tonight. Well done...oh so lovely. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
magic in the sky, charcoal black night, chalk white moon snowflakes touch this heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. It is so amazing how bright the landscape in winter. Enjoyed. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...what a sight! |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
this is great, i have no idea how many nights i've stood outside ( i dont smoke in my house, its a nasty habit, smiles ) and wondered how to creat a poem about starts, i think my muse has an low iron because she is so lifeless she might as well be dead, anyway, this was perfect, short but deep. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Noah...the moon and stars are family.. Barry, glad you liked this.. Your kind comments are very much appreciated, Ethel.. Nancy, the moon certainly lit up the sky last night...did you see it?? We could have gone for a walk in the moonlight.. Thank you, inkedgoddess..glad you stopped by.. ThisDiamond..you are so right.. Thank you, passing shadows.. Enchantingvamp...thank you and I hope your muse returns to inspire you.. [This message has been edited by scorpio (01-17-2003 09:18 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spherical arcing White orb searching horizons Leaving love in wake |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Karilea...your kind support means a lot to me.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Since tonight is the official full moon.... another go round is required.  *Bump* ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Souls Shadow Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 29 |
behind haze of fog lies moon in fullness of night brazen in dark cold |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty post. So often less is so more. ThisDiamond |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Am not familiar with the Japanese style. Is this a senryu or a haiku? Great read. Thanks. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for your reply Souls Shadow...well done.. ThisDiamond..that's often the case... thank you.. Winston, I was trying for a haiku...not sure if I accomplished it...thank you for stopping by.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and the earth is now aligned between Jupiter and the sun revealing the planet with the big spot..pleasant read  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Ecrivan..I appreciate your reading.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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