Open Poetry #23 |
Time’s Gift Part 2 of the trilogy |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Time’s Gift Part 2 of the trilogy The sun won’t stand still in time for me No matter that my soul cries piteously The wind will still blow, as it has to do Time can’t stop because I’ve lost you Day will follow night once more The sea will still rush to meet the shore All that should be will continue so Everything in nature has its natural flow Seasons may change but they follow on Summer’s warm sun by autumn will be gone Winter’s cold can’t hold back the spring Which when it comes new life will bring And just because you aren’t here with me Doesn’t mean I’ve lost your spirit totally Within my soul I’ll still cherish your heart While it is with me love will never depart The world will still spin around in space Measuring the minutes of this time and place The sky will continue to arch overhead All this will not stop because you are dead And my heart will continue to beat on There will still be inside my soul’s love song I will still hear your voice within me Telling me to strive to live on contentedly Time will pass and when it does this I know I will follow you when it’s my time to go Marsha Part 1 The Price /pip/Forum74/HTML/001649.html Part 3 But I Promised /pip/Forum74/HTML/001759.html Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (11-10-2002 02:39 PM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
mum I will tell you when it is time to go ok you are not going anywhere at all you are staying with me ok. Excellent writing I’m keeping this one it is special Very well written love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"The world will still spin around in space" for all must go on, we must know our place, whether we sometimes wish to, or not... in that love, love continues... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) And when time is over, time hasn't really ended for the spirit of love will always go on like the seasons and shine sun or moon! (kiss on cheek) This is so wonderfully said, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a true gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
To every thing there is a season, and a time for every purpose under heaven. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That's quite a torch you're carrying there, mushy....are you sure you're not the statue of Liberty? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To say this is touching is an understatement, to say it's beautiful sounds trite... to say you've left me with no words to say about sums it up. *S* Magnificent! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Few can walk this path with such grace. And even fewer can describe it. You do it with such love and passion. This too has touched me in a very personal way. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marsha, this is very, very touching. Now, part three. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
forgot library on this one, too. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, only you can offer sorrow in one hand and hope in the other. Loved it! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I understand this feeling you have to work through and I know how strong you are..and yes you will go on..until it's your time... hugs M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha The tears are flowing so freely as I ready your beautiful words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for this, Marsha dear... How did you know? ~ hugs of sadness Lyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Krissy beloved daughter I wub you, and I know you wouldn’t let me go anywhere without at least a decade of notice and a form in triplicate Kari darling heart I know it I, and all will be as it should be. Thank you Loner 23 darling heart thank you Noah darling boy truly you are someone we all thank for your unswerving devotion to us all, thank you for you Nan darling heart sister, yes that is truth all to its season, autumn covered my tree with colours that shone now winter hurries to fill me with icy cold, but spring will come again. Thank you for your friendships hand Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
’Deer dearest heart thank you for the smiles they are always welcome. Only you could shed such warmth and it is appreciated it truly is Suthern beloved heart I thank HIM for the touch of you, YOU always cover my days with lightness and even as the darkness creeps slowly to me you illume the sky Larry darling heart thank you for the friendship and the touch of hope that you spread. You are special Garysgirl darling girl thank you for your appreciation Keth beloved one……… as always darling you leave me speechless, your ability to empathise and look within me is something I treasure and I always will. YOU know every thought and what is more you understand me so well. Thank you for you always Little Mo darling heart sister, Thank you darling heart you are so perceptive to what I’m feeling right now Sue darling heart, thank you darling YOU are an inspiration you know Lyra darling heart sending you loving hugs too, take care of yourself Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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