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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“DANCING SHOES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I was just drifting and juking, as I skipped down the street… Wondering what I would find, maybe something really sweet… My feet were perpetual motion, had on my magic dancing shoes… Was floating like a butterfly, something I couldn’t defuse… Heard that musical rhythm, what else but, need I say… It was that slow bluesy stuff, sexy melody, from the alleyway… Found you there feeling the same, once touched we started to groove… It must come from inside the soul, you’ll feel it, when we start to move… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (10-19-2002 10:18 AM).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your verses skip lightly across the page. Glad to read a happy poem to start off the day Liz |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, I've got to get myself some of those magic shoes! I want to hear your music. This is great ... hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Such a light, airy feel to this. It makes me want to put my dancing shoes on and dance my way through the day. As always...an uplifting, romanticly inclined poem. Enjoyed this very much. ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, I liked this poem. I could almost see you dancing to that jazzy music. Keep dancing, friend. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill If you feel like dancing, then there's a song in your heart. That's a good thing! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I felt like I was floating like a butterfly and swimming in circles reading this jazz, this is gorgeous and sexy, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Captivating! You made me feel like I was right there, experiencing your emotion and energy! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill..."shake your groove thing...shake your groove thing." Member that one? I enjoyed this poem to-day. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill Very nice. Makes me happy to read it. So glad you wrote it cause the pleasure is all mine.  SG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How delightfully energizing and romantic! What fun! I know what you're talking about! ---and you wrote it soooo well! You have lightened my heart on a day when things have been somewhat difficult for me. But, there will always be something to lift one's spirits, and for me at this moment, it was your poem! Thank you dear Troubador! Or should I refer to you as dear Fred (Astaire)! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Congrats on your 5000th post Bill! Let's dance the night away!  Hugs & Smiles, Nancy |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes congratulations on 5000 posts, Bill. Grab your dancing shoes and take Enchantress out on the town dancing..... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, I really hope those shoes are a size eleven. Because this boy is in desparate need! Fabulous write. Flowed well and went down real smooth. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
I was just moseying on back and came upon this one. I like this Bill-- of course I love to dance so it would click for me... but then again.. who doesn't like dancing. I liked. caterina |
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