Coffee girl (repost for doreen's java jive challenge)

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bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

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0 posted 2002-08-13 02:07 PM

That girl's a hazel brew.
Her scent wafts to my gaze.
Like drowning in her brine.
How she drops wet spoons.
We brighten uncurl cream.
To cloudy dance the night.
Leave old stains on the plates.
Dark kiss the tasted kiss away.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

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Virginia

1 posted 2002-08-13 02:41 PM

wonderful!!!!! thank you!!!

would you like to see it published in a little coffee poetry book?

Sunshine

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2 posted 2002-08-13 02:57 PM

Well of course he would!
BSQ...another hit!

bsquirrel

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3 posted 2002-08-13 02:59 PM

I can't think of a better place for it, Doreen. Thanks!

And glad you liked the sip of this poem, Karilea.

Mikey

han_tigger
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since 2002-08-10

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4 posted 2002-08-13 03:26 PM

I like the imagery here.

bsquirrel

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5 posted 2002-08-13 04:43 PM

Thanks, han_tigger, for likin' the brew.

Y'know, there really should be a coffee mug icon.

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2002-08-13 05:10 PM

What a cute poem.... kinda dreamy like a almond mocha .. nice work of meta4s....

Sherry

btw you are right... need a coffee icon...
had to go hunting my own down

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

bsquirrel

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7 posted 2002-08-13 06:22 PM

Now I'm thirsty.

Glad you enjoyed, Mm.

Greeneyes

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8 posted 2002-08-13 07:13 PM

WOW Mike I love this.....

well done sir...

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

bsquirrel

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9 posted 2002-08-13 07:39 PM

Much appreciated, Lauren. *sip*

Mistletoe Angel

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10 posted 2002-08-13 08:20 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Now this is one latte of a poem, I love it! Enjoyed this cuppa a' inspiration, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!