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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I love Dr. Seuss, and I was thinking how fun it would be to see if any of us out there can write like the good Dr. It can be happy, sad, silly, political,about Christmas, whatever gets you going  I thought this would be fun......Common! Give it a try!  -SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Could be fun. I think I have one at work. let me check and get back to you. Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, I wrote this in response to a poem Balladeer wrote and I think it's got the rythmn and flow of Dr Seuss however the subject matter is debatable. Kind to you you know I am even when you're eating spam even when the cows come home even when your cover's blown could I would I there's the rub I would love you in the tub In the street and in the mall kindness to you will never pall should you could you ever see just what it is you mean to me I would be kind, I would be true I would teach a thing or two So Balladeer don't you fret for I will be kind across the net. Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 Oh Kethry!!! I love this! It does have a Dr. Seuss feel to it! Perfect! Was this a reply or a poem you posted? It should have it's own post in Open, cause this is fantastic! Thank you for putting this in here for me to see -SEA |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Hi Sea, What a fun idea! I gave it a try and posted mine in the corner pub! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Here's the one from work. Hello I just want to say could we, should we walk today it's been a week or maybe more I know you're headed out the door but could we walk in a park together pacing would be a lark exercise could pump our heart and we must make a start could we should walk away if not tomorrow then today walk in the park across the bench in the dark and by a trench in the rain and in the snow walking is the way to go. could we should we walk today walking, walking I hear you say that's all you ever ask of me we could go walking by a tree by a tree and in the park across the bench and in the dark by a trench and in the rain in the snow we'll walk again. Could we should we what do you say if not tomorrow then today. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
The two poems posted are great. I think I'll give this a try. It's been so long since I heard or read a Dr. Sues book though. hopr I get it right.IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Oh, my goodness what you've done Now I've really come undone I've place my little Dr. Seuss piece in Open #11 for all to see It is causing quite the stir I think perhaps you should SEA what this challenge has brought to me ! You can find it yes, you can It's entitled Spam I Am ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, I don't know if it is worth putting on Open, but it's what came across when I was either tinking or thinking... ~~~ I don't know how to grow old gracefully though I very much want to do so willingly see… my role models left, left me in uncertain form and I've past the norm where youth was firm and fine tho I now discern that certain facts escape me somehow so sad I could use a role model now, and pass stories past on somehow through the mouth of some kin, remembering when they were told and then sharing caring but all of this has given me resolve to let me live and be as grand an old person as I can be [now insert a wheee…..whee….we…] sometimes I'd give a certainteed look to be of caliber for a Dr. Seuss book so then I think that instead of rhyme I'll be a SEA's type of kind where nothing makes sense and then sense would make of all the more I'd shove it in a Steveadore if I could just have one more chance at the closed door, to place it on the barroom floor and take that dance just one more time and make that couple give one more rhyme and live life like it should be lived and allow me the chance to give, give, give… because the couple you see would go out to the SEA to show just this, that rhymes so much with me and what I would really like to do is rhyme just with me and you time with just me and you bind with just you and me and to be old gracefully see it not in what I see so I'll go on so gracefully on to what it should be and travel on to eternity in the thought of what could be you… and me… |
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