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February and You
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February and You |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It is not your cold Or the changing grey of your storms But the dry of me That knows you to be Too frigid to rain tears Yet hopes for them To fall as snow That would cover This barren With a touch Of beauty. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Eloquently written, Ron.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What Scorpio said... this is wonderful Captain.. Perfectly penned. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ya know, I'm running out of ways to express my appreciation for your ability to reach me in places, just beneath the surface. This is so low key, compared to some of yours...yet I think it's now one of my favorites. Maybe because of the images and emotions it evoked, maybe 'cause it's just damn good poetry! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I like it! But help me...my mind asks "barren" what? I'm having trouble with figuring it out and am sure it's just me. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
.."the dry of me.." Loved that line. Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words fall gracefully on the page... Warm hugs for a grey and snowy February morning, EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh my! Quite deeply touching! Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Personal... not so subliminal... Mother Nature... and others listen... |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
if only some people would get that without having to be told... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But the dry of me That knows you to be Too frigid to rain tears Yet hopes for them To fall as snow That would cover This barren With a touch Of beauty. ................................ ................................ ......... oh damn .............. ................................ ................................ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, Sort of go along with Duncan on this one, enjoyed. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...just hugs, you've already got the snow. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ron, hey, i didn't know you were good at writing short poems too! thanks for the read |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad, but touching |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
hauntingly beautiful. Sunkissed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ron, this is lovely, sweet friend, your words truly are ambrosia to many hearts and I know can bring warmth to your loved ones from any chill, this is enduring, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ron - enjoyed this soft write. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
your poems of late, have put the chill back into winter...fiercly expressive... sorry I have not been around more to reply...everything you write is excellent as always |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Another excellent and touching write, Capt. Ron..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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