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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the drivein has been closed for years now they never tore it down, just let it dissolve slowly like our moments together as we savor them with our mouths backed in with the tailgate down and that old matress from the thrift shop who needs a movie to watch the way you look in moonlight when you don’t want to wrinkle your dress you like the cave under my arm, you say when you fit your little girl there and sip part of my wine and hold it in your mouth to make it the right temperature just before you give it to me in a kiss and ask me if I want more and if I like it better just from the bottle then you pout at how long I make you wait while I look at your eyes and don’t answer you pull my finger down to make it reach there so it will touch just the ends of you so lightly and you say I make them come on your woman lights, when you just think of my hands and did I notice you were not really cold anymore you ask me if worms cuddle when they sleep and would it be silly to pretend they did and we were…and did we have to sleep if we did , or could we just wiggle around and pretend we were dancing under ground ©Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, You know worms are blind? Enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I enjoyed... you paint the scene well and spice it with enough emotion to make it real. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"the drivein has been closed for years now they never tore it down, just let it dissolve slowly like our moments together" I suppose you know by now, that I love your poetry, but I'll tell you again anyway....I love your poetry  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ You place just enough sensuality-laced thoughts in your pieces to draw one close to a *sigh*~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You brought back some drive in memories for me with your word flick. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes DS..as martie said you brought back some memories of the drive-in movies..i think when i was 15 i can remember a few of us hid in the trunk of the car so we wouldnt have to pay haa..we were called cheap dates ha...  and of course some memories more exciting than that one too ha.. ~Victoria
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, thank you my friend, and yes love is also blind? Cpat, so pleased that you enjoyed the view..thank you SEA, yes I do know, but it is sooo wonderful to hear it more, thank you hon Marge, you bless me with your word touch, thank you Sunshine..(such language ) (wink) (thank you) Martie, they (drive-ins) were a special place in my life too, although the patrons were not real impressed with the old panhead blasting them with sound when I pulled in. Thank you for the read and reply Victoria, I always rode in on the harley, and parked somewhere close to a station wagon or a pickup...(wink) Thanks babe bet you were cute climbing out of the trunk... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thanks for the inspire.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My computer is smoking! Thanks for the sensual remember. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you pull my finger down to make it reach there so it will touch just the ends of you so lightly and you say I make them come on your woman lights, when you just think of my hands and did I notice you were not really cold anymore ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH MY!!! *bump* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is very sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always are filled with surreal beauty and ignite these pages with passion and inspiration! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Deca, so enjoyed your result of inspire Enchanting one....and your bumps always make we want to face you first Noah, my friend thank you for your eyes |
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