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Attempt at Sven's challange... U
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Attempt at Sven's challange... U |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Well, I never promised the best poem... LOL.. but here is my answer to the challange..
[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-03-2002 12:43 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful reply to the challenge, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words always touch our hearts unbelievably, sweet friend, we all love you so much! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Tara - I sure could not have met this challenge. I felt this expressed a discovery of freedom within oneself, to live our lives the way we want to. Anyway, I enjoyed. Dave |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - As always, thank you for your wonderful reply  Dave - That is what I was hoping it would be seen as  . I had my doubts about meeting this challange. I kept putting off doing it until I finally said enough and put my mind to work "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
beautiful! i know a bit more about the lady behind it than some, i think, (heh) and as such my perspective on this is a bit different... to me, this speaks of defiance towards the chains of the past. my dear, i come bearing gifts... namely, a cold chisel and a sledge  let's get those chains off right now, shall we?-Dave |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You did very well! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
uniquely understated Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah, a character sketch. . . I like it. . . great job Tara. . . maybe you and Dave should work together on one using only the letters D and U!! LOL ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave - Keep that chisel and sledge handy, they will be needed, as you know. Love you babe Micheal - Well thank you very much  Sven - I'm glad you liked And nooooooooooooooooo! At least not for a little bit LOL.. my brain needs a rest  "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
kwel and I had trouble with E Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Unusually unique understated understanding. Challenge wonderfully met. ((Tara)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
GREAT! Since I can't write this stuff (you've used all my words...hee, hee) I'll just hop on your coattails and add...at the end... unfettered, UNDONE! Now...I feel I've participated! jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
utterly unique utterance under ur umbrella! Nice Tara.... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Unbelievably Unique. floria Floria |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well, you sure did this good. |
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