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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A Winter’s Night Part 3 Part 1 Part 2 T’was a cold gray twilight in the winter, Thoughts drifting to what to make for dinner, Something warm for the soul throughout the night, Spicy and hot followed by something sweet, Then thoughts disrupted when I saw my light. Shades raised I could see inside from the street Thoughts of burglars did replaced things to eat, Then I remembered about my house guest, To whom I’d left there a long day ago, My mood wasn’t glad but I’d try my best. Some things were in places they did not go, She was being helpful and did not know, Perhaps it was just boredom and loneliness, And the changed things were easy to repair, Perhaps she didn’t understand I like darkness. Visibly changed with clean clothes and combed hair, Barely looked like the same two I’d left there, She smiled at me as her little girl did play, And it seems she had made a nice dinner, I guess I will let her stay another day. End Part 3 All persons in this story are fictional, any correlation to any one living or dead is coincidental [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (02-15-2002 10:43 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Professor, for some reason your links aren't working. I tried to go in and "fix" them but so far, nothing. You may want to go in and recut/paste them in so they link back to the poems for easy access. As for the poem...I get the feeling this story is not yet done...even though you say "end". Perhaps you'll reconsider? |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ah, Gloom. The story gets better with each new part. Do I detect a fading of darkness, attacked by light. Ah! Hurry! We are waiting with baited breath for Part 4.  ((Gloom)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sunshine, Sorry that the links don’t work, I’m a poet not a computer geek, but I’ll try to fix the situation. I think they’ll be a part 4, eventually. Glad you’ve liked it so far. Thank you, Silver Streak, A fading of Darkness? Now how could that happen? As for the baited breath, I suggest you lay off the anchovy pizzas. Pleased you enjoyed. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
The story isn't over yet Gloom... : ) so far... very good |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, yep, I think this story has ore parts to go! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I shall be looking forward to Part IV.... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you Zinsser, Mistletoe Angle, & Sunshine Part 4 will come, but I might add a few independent ones In the MEAN time. Thank you for your support. Gloom |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Methinks your stories are NEVER quite over.. and that's as it should be... Don'tcha think??..  |
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