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Justbleu for now! (I met your challenge)
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Justbleu for now! (I met your challenge) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Justbleu for now! By Larry Chadwick The enigma of love sought, Ever longing for what it offers. The pain of life lived, The rejection of the scoffers. The agony of losing those you love, And the defeats that life can bring. But still the driven determination, And abiding ability to want to sing. Even now she sings of the joy of life, Of what it has been before. Abiding in the hope that it offers, And will be hers once more. She isn’t depressed she’s Justbleu, Not a permanent state of mind. Through all the challenges faced. She knows love she will find. Independent and bold is this, Gentle woman of loves desires. Strong of mind and tender of heart, Unwilling to quench her fires. So hope does abound for Justbleu, Stronger assets are hard to find. For I’ll bet all I’ve got, She’ll find a man with a cute behind! February 4, 2002 [This message has been edited by Larry C (02-05-2002 09:51 AM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
She'll absolutely love this!!! Larry you crack me up!!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
amusemi, I hope so. I don't even know her. But she is from Oregon so I can't go wrong. Besides I don't think I missed the mark but much...LOL  |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
She's gotta love it Larry.. that last line really... erum.. cracked me up ::laughs:: Way to go Larry!!  Pepper |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Pepper, Lookin' for a smile on that pretty face that doesn't smile enough. Maybe we can fix that. Hope this works. Doing the research was fun! GO Justbleu... [This message has been edited by Larry C (02-05-2002 09:52 AM).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hehe.... LOL!!!!! wonderful!!!! she's gonna love this!!!! beautiful!! hmmm.... and what a great end!!!!!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
dor, You should know a good end when you see one! Thanks. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh Larry, you always make me smile, your words are always so funny and delightful to read! JustBleu is indeed a wonderful friend and beautiful person and I just know she will find all her heart desires! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hehehehe.... Larry C... The END is great....very funny....I'll have to keep my eye out for that cute behind. You captured MUCH in this. Very nice sweet poet. Challenge well met.  I wonder if anyone else is up to the challenge....huh???I've only been in Oregon 2 years...Alaska is home!!! I enjoyed this a lot!!!! I needed a little lift me up Thank YOU!!!! Take Care, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* perfect and I see you have hit the mark and brought a smile to her face..well done....  **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
whoa larry, you did a fine job at this challenge!! im glad to see that justbleu loved it as much as we all did. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, How did you know she was lookin' for a cute behind? lol Thanks dear friend. Bridgette, My wife says "no wonder she's Justbleu...she lives in Oregon." Sorry, she has a thing about rain! lol Thanks this was particularly fun as I had not crossed your path before I read your challenge. And I found it irresistable. I'm pleased you liked it. Thanks. Karen, It worked...didn't it. Cool! Thanks.Joanna, Thank you sweetie! |
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