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Doctor Love
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Doctor Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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His hands may hold the healing touch the cure which women seek so much. His heart may teach theirs how to beat He makes the EKG's complete. He diagnoses all the needs that women have, he stops their bleed. Makes happy those who once were sad He shows them love they never had. He knows whatever causes ills alleviates it with his pills- those made of golden words and hands He makes them think he understands. Yes, Doctor Love sells happiness but now he's sued for malpractice. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
catalinamoon, wow...I always enjoy anything you write, and this is no exception. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
catalinamoon, not sure where the most of darkness is, in a bad doctor or the lawyer. But there is one doctor who can heal both men and women. And He still Heals, today. I know. My open heart was botched 31 years ago and the doctors said to pray for me to die. Well, my family prayed but for healing and it worked! And so I'm still around harassing doctors and others to look for pure healing and prevention, not symptom dumbing. Thanks for sharing your fine poem. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, great write here on a topic that comes up in the news far too often. Very well said my friend. Take care. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
When can I make an appointment ?  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oooohhhh...can I schedule an appointment a week from today? (smiles) Soooooo beautifully creative, sweet friend, your words are always such a perscription of poetic passion and love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
the trouble is with Doctor Love he doesnt tell us there may be side affects..  heartbreak and tears and depression ha..  nicely done hon~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
An interesting take on a common subject. Well worth the read and well penned! Bravo! -heather I do not seek...I find! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very interesting and clever! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
A very clever write indeed. I loved this, floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - I must also say a very clever write. Enjoyed the surprise ending... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An interesting subject,Sandra...and very well written. I remember back in the seventies, Neil Diamond used to sing a song called "Dr. Love's Salvation Show" It was about a faith healer.....but it sounds like your subject has some very different ideas.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly*I think I will just look for cupid...do you think he can do a better job than Doctor Love? With Valentine's Day quickly approaching I am hoping to at least find a little love....Santa didn't come through  maybe cupid will here's hoping for us both, Sandra. **big hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I was thinking of a certain man who professed to have such qualities, and turned out to be a fraud. Thus the malpractice suit. Thanks for reading.. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sweetie, This is a good way to look at the Doc's bad deeds! I've thought about you alot of late and desided that was some of the best days I have had in so very long and want more of them, but no DOC just two happy sisters ya? Love, Cerenity |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a great write Sandra, as this happens far to often and serves as a good warning. There was a mentally challenged young girl here whose parents sued the doctor for being a "doctor love" and it sickens me. She was not the first, but is the last! It is informative writing like this that helps community awareness. Good job! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Very crafty..I really enjoyed it. Christine I can't control |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It's ok...I stole his prescription pad! |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Personally, I'd be wondering about his bedside manner. A new look at the good Doctor, maybe I'll make my appointments elsewhere. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! Sandra you have penned an almost perfect piece! I don't know how you'd make it any better, so I'll say, in my mind, it IS perfect. How did you find my other alias, huh? Love, Doc Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (01-10-2002 02:24 PM).] |
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