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Howling Winds |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Howling Winds At the windows, can you hear it howling I snuggle closer within your embrace Afraid of what this night might have out prowling I feel pressure as my heart starts to race Fear shines in my eyes as I gaze at you An unknown evil that howling winds bring Your tender touch will my shivers subdue With passionate kiss my heart starts to sing Cocooned within the strength of loving arms Silenced are all the fears that froze my heart I’m lost in the desire of manly charms While howling winds commanded to depart Such warmth fills this room as lovers entwine A soft melody nature is playing As human sighs and howling winds combine We move in timeless dance for two, swaying Karen Torbiak 2002 Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I like this part.... "Such warmth fills this room as lovers entwine A soft melody nature is playing As human sighs and howling winds combine We move in timeless dance for two, swaying" very well done!!  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooo sensually exciting, sweet friend, your words always breathe whirlwinds of poetic passion! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, may the wind bring true loves blessings to your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I can here Beethoven here with the howling winds and a warm embrace..just kidding...a heartwarming piece  |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
I loved your poem... Howling Winds (His Story) *~* Calm love, there is no need for worry, The wind is only a malace, A malace my arms will defeat, Come close and I will envelope you, Envelope you tonight even through this withering chill, Our hearts will beat as one, As your soft soul bends into mine, Tonight the howling winds will cease, And I will hold you, I will love you, Kiss you soft and make the fear subside, For there is no howl over the sound of our love |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What a lovely idea!! That will surely drive out fear.. Beautiful poem.. Hugz, Pepper |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH yes in deedeee....this is a cutie... goin to the library... Just teasing....but this is awesome, I love it.....you and your wind, breezes and who knows what else... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem, very much enjoyed reading it Julie |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Startime, howling winds and enclosing arms...the only thing missing is the log fire. Perfect cosy picture you painted. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,I could just picture this as a log cabin with snow outside and the fireplace burning.Very romantic!Here is you a cup of coffee while he warms you up.   Juanita |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Startime... this is an excellent read. Enjoyed it |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
SEA...The chinook winds were blowing last night and this is what came out. I am so glad you like it. **big hugs** Noah...you are such a sweetheart. I always love to see your gently comments. **big hugs** ecrivan...*grin* they sure were howling for a while...I wish I had had a warm embrace. **big hug**I am glad you enjoyed it. Ocelot...*sigh* what a wonderful comment. I love it. So very romantic. If you don't mind I think I will add it to my library. **big hugs** pepperment35...oh yes, the best remedy for fear there is. *grin* I am glad you like it. **big hugs** Magnus...*giggling* you are just too much. Thank you...I am glad you like my winds...they are still howling today..maybe another poem is forthcoming. **big hugs** Julie...I am so glad you enjoyed it..*big hugs** Kethry...oh yes, that is the perfect addition... a blazing fire with no light but the flickers cast by the flames. *sigh* I love it. **big hugs** Juanita...Thank you, the perfect way to start a day when the winds are still howling so loudly. **big hugs** Alan...I am very glad you enjoyed it...just daydreaming again. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh yes!! I like this!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Nightshade...Thank you so much...it was such a wonderful vision...the winds are still howling here. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
safety in my arms pledging with a look and a kiss melting into you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Interloper......*sigh* oh yes,,,,,I love this comment...so romantic and so very you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ My stars ! This is beautifully inspiring~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
mmmmmm swaying...yes.. yes..yes..  lovely sweet Karen..nicely done~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Karen, this is fantastic! BRAVO! The poem howls with passion and love. And Ocelot's reply! Wow. Put these two together in a duet, howling and hugging, love protecting against fear. Into my library, replies and all.   |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Very nicely said, Karen...loved it... hugs, amigo |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
An intertwining of words blessed from the heart and felt with the winds of time. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen, you write such romantic poetry. So warm and heartfelt, i love reading them so much. floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh so beautifully romantic, Karen. My favorite for romance is during a storm. I especially love thunderstorms. Beauriful writing......as usual!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A slice of heaven! Cor |
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