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Open Poetry #17

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Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

0 posted 2001-11-26 02:40 PM

With you
I feel perfection in my grasp.
I see the world
through rose colored glasses.
For you have shown me a love
like no other.
A sense of being
which comsumes me
and completes me.
With you
I am happiness.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-11-26 02:46 PM

What an ending! "I am happiness" instead of just saying you're happy is really powerful.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-11-26 02:46 PM

Awww how pretty and sincere! This poem is exactly how I'm feeling right now about a special person : )

Best Wishes,
RP

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-26 03:00 PM

Abigaile, this is a LOVE poem, pure and simple. Thanks for sharing.

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2001-11-26 03:19 PM

After all, Happiness is the key to life.

So glad you found it.

Hugs fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

John Yaws
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

5 posted 2001-11-26 03:33 PM

Beautiful sentiments, beautifully expressed.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-11-26 03:44 PM

How beautiful! The synergy of love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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