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Soft Feelings |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Soft Feelings The fire spreads its warmth throughout the room casting a soft glow that matches the one in my heart Winds howl against the windows rattling in time to unknown music and I feel my heart try to keep pace with love’s vibrations Soft music flows into my limbs carrying me along on it gentle path as my body responds to the caress of sweet love songs Words so softly speaking of romance, fill my mind with yearning to hold the heart of someone writing love poems The fire, the winds, the music, the words all come together this night bringing sighs to my lips and Soft Feelings to my heart Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And someday you will feel the beating of his heart to yours, and he'll forever recite his love songs to your heart! (smiles) Soooooo beautiful, sweet Karen, I love it! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Karen, You have such a radiant heart, I simply love reading your poems. One lucky guy is going to get to experience your soft, romantic feelings |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. Just like the others that you post. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think you need to change your pen name. Startime....Showtime?.....such a time?... What a time?...Aw heck...leave it...just continue to write your romantic spells over us...we will know who you are...even if you don't use a name at all...Beautiful, Karen. I love this poem. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Words so softly speaking of romance, fill my mind with yearning to hold the heart of someone writing love poems Great verse, Karen. Wish I'd written it! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a beautiful piece  Beautiful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your words set such a beautiful stage, Karen..  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Your heart and soul are filled with love and joy.and one day some lucky man will get to share all that you have to offer.You have a beautiful heart. Peaches |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This poem reads soft as a whisper, lovely writing, Startime... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Yet another stunning piece of romance you have bestowed upon us Karen....wonderful! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Stunningly lovely~ Delicate and divine~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, this is beautiful! So glad someone brought it back to the front page as I somehow missed it. Lovely romantic write. ~hugs, Nancy! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now that my friend, I wish I had written. Beautiful and the end is perfect! jwesley |
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