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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-26 09:47 AM

Your words sing to me with a magic beat
Soft rhythm flowing deep into all hearts
You say so much that is tender and sweet
Such gentleness your unknown touch imparts
With poetic words you whisper my name
Filling me with desire to feel your kiss
You have lit in me an eternal flame
Leaving me in a state of happy bliss
Though the world may be blind to what we feel
I will show my true love to you in rhyme
Singing to you the truth that is real
As I declare my heart in poems sublime
..Dreaming of feeling the touch of your hand
..If we but meet across this distant land

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-10-26 09:49 AM

Karen,
This poem is a whole bouquet of roses. Beautiful

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-26 09:51 AM

(smiles) You will, sweet friend, and together you will hold each others hand and have hearts singing serenades forever! (big hugggssssss) This is such a lovely sonnet, sweet Karen! I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-10-26 11:11 AM

Sigh..beautiful flowing words, from a beautiful heart. May the dream come true.
Sandra

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2001-10-26 11:13 AM

~Big sigh~ So lovely Karen... Bonnie

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

5 posted 2001-10-26 11:14 AM

This was a very good read!!!!!!!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-10-26 12:43 PM

sing love's song to me
let us duet together
and in love entwine

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-10-26 08:32 PM

I never knew a Star could become a Nightingale?

Your poetic abilities are certainly growing
with each day of your postings. I have
seen so much feelings and beauty expressed
within everything you are writing. nicely
done Star.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-10-26 08:33 PM

I love these singing words.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-10-26 08:57 PM

Beautifully written and expressed! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

10 posted 2001-10-26 11:35 PM

Karen; This is so beautifully written. Such expression. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Wanda

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2001-10-27 07:13 AM

Karen,
Your heart is indeed singing in this one.
Lovely poem.

Hugs,
Deb

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2001-10-27 11:38 AM

enjoy

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-10-27 12:42 PM

*sigh*, how beautifully romantic. Lovely poem, lovely thoughts, such love.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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