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She waits |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Quietude flies in to spread a soothing sheen, Like nature's children draped in shades of green, While leaves quiver in an invented fright, From a gentle breeze, whose strokes are so light. The grass invites in a silken embrace, (feels) Like heaven on earth that one's lucky to grace, While glad songbirds dart in tuneful delight, Using tender wings to glide in smooth flight. In playful oneness of earth and the stream, There exists no burden; it's all a dream. There, engulfed by calm, she sits on her perch, Yet, waiting for the one who likes to search. [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 10-03-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ 'Quietude flies in to spread a soothing sheen' I could use double-doses of that 'quietude'~ So very good to see you, my friend. I trust that you are well. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice images constructed here... and a feeling of both dreaming and being at one with the world... I enjoyed... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How beautiful! Nice to see you here and to read your wonderful poetry Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Nice to see you back, enjoyed the read. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your rhyme is absolutely perfect! Kathleen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So, so good to see you back in the forums... welcome home, and thank you for this treat! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
She shouldn't have to wait, she should be overwhelmed by throngs rushing to her quiet. You have quietly sent some peaceful wonderful thoughts with this poem. Thank you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sudhir--I've missed you! This poem is a delight to the senses. Feels like spring. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
what a beautiful heart you have, so much tenderness..... absolutely gorgeous..... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So good to see you back. A beautiful write you have given us. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much. Your kind words are gladdening. Regards, Sudhir |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oooh, how did I miss this one? It's positively beautiful! :-) --------------------- "In playful oneness of earth and the stream There exists no burden; it's all a dream. --------------------- And there is a dream-like quality to this piece. I very much enjoyed the read and I'm bumping this one to the top! :-) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh, this makes me feel as though I am floating on a peaceful cloud....lovely indeed. ~warm hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
very beautiful words  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully descriptive words my friend ... so lovely to see you gracing these pages of blue with such a tender and soothing write, just wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, my friends, for coming by. I really appreciate each of your kindest words. Regards, Sudhir |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahhh it's a pleasure to read your poems again, good to see you back here Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beauty and peace flow gently from your pen... this is lovely! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done Sir. . . you always paint a superb portrait with your words. . . this is no exception. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely beautiful images, as if in the wake of a whisper. I am glad you have returned and will look for more of your wonderful work. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir lyer~ how wonderful to get to read your poetry again! I hope you will delight us with more. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very nice...I like the way you used your words too paint a peaceful and beautiful picture.....take care! Nathan |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My friends, thank you all so very much... You all are very kind. Regards, Sudhir |
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