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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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words I should have spoken once upon my yesterday I whisper them to the wind hoping somehow, they’ll find their way to your heart if not your ear so that you may know you are so dear still, always, forever you abide where I may not forget I should have tried…. I should have told you, what was and what always will be you are the very breath in me ~SEA~ "when I catch my breath, it's you I breathe" ~Michelle Branch~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! Sea...you do these sooo beautifully!! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
"You are the very breath in me" ~ Oh so beautiful SEA. |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Amazingly touching... beautiful work, Susan. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Truly a lovely piece, Sea.  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is lovely. hoping somehow, they’ll find their way to your heart if not your ear Just lovely If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Enchantress~ you are so nice to me, thank you Bonnie~ thank you so much Topeth~ you are very kind, I'm happy you liked this thank you TA~ thank you |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracey~ you snuck in there thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
still, always, forever you abide where I may not forget I should have tried…. I should have told you, what was and what always will be you are the very breath in me =================================== and you have whispered and exhaled pure poetry... this is just beautiful Sea... sweetly romantic ... softly sensual..... loved the turn of phrase love your new sig too Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Lovely, lovely~ You knew I'd like it~ ... I do~*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
the wind speaks to me my heart hears your words of love and I breathe them in |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JM~ thank you very much Marge~ I hoped thank you Interloper~  you are the best |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
A warm loving write. Great job. alan |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How I would love to be your breath! I'd love to be your sigh.. I'd love to be your whisper or The twinkle in your eye. I'd love to be the sound you make As love comes into view. I'd love to be your murmur and I'd love to be with you.  (only kidding, Mr. SEA!! ) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan, you are so nice to me, thank you Balladeer, *SIGH * you are soooooo good love that reply, and don't worry about the Mr. he is a good sport thank you for the smile and warm fuzzies |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
you took the words right outa my mouth! that was very nice |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, your unspoken words speak much louder than most spoken words...very nicely done..very gentle smile |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, Yay at this  You are just to good chickie  Once again.. I like.I need a darn quote. *chuckles* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at you grow.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm breathless after reading this one. Absolutely awesome. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I love the feel of this Sea. Filled with romance and longing. Know the feeling only too well though.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I get tearied just at the thought. So tender and touching. Thank you. Larry C |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is much too beautiful to languish on the back pages. Sooooooo, BTTT. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Sea, lovely writing. Your words are very beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing. ~Marie~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh oh...another shouda, woulda, coulda...don't get too many of them or you'll have to go straight to jail...and don't pass go...and haven't we all...James |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
really very lovely piece..... soft and tender from start to finish. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
SEA,Iliked it a lot |
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