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Romance . . . . (connectring rictameters) . . . . reply |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Romance, A word, a touch A slow, swirling dance Fantasies fly through both our minds Fearing the spoken word, don’t take a chance Of waking from this reverie Passion seen in a glance There is only Romance Passionate words Spoken and heard perchance To ensure evening’s outcome Desires conveyed surely as Cupid’s lance Arms tenderly encircling you I am on the advance And we will have Romance Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this nice reply to SEA's poem |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think some folks think it's Friday Night in here... Whew, and Wow.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
close enough to Friday for me!  Interloper.....you give the sweetest smiles....and such wonderful sighs....I love this  a keeper for my library! ~SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Fantastic ! What a joy to see the interlude between two such talented poets ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Brad ~ Thank you for the nice comment. Sunshine ~ Or maybe Saturday SEA ~ You really know how to make a guy feel good, but I am concerned with the quality of your library if you are including my work Marge ~ How wonderful ... Thank you Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Kewl. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you sound determined!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, Don't want to interloper but I like this. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
" Desires conveyed surely as Cupid’s lance Arms tenderly encircling you I am on the advance And we will have Romance " Oh someone's in for an interesting time........great poem! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStart ~ Thank you. Colleen ~ I can be m'gal. Yes indeed. Seymour ~ You are never an interloper. Thanks for the kind comments ethome ~ Thank you my friend. Ov corse, it could just be fantasy What do you think? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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