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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-05-07 04:11 PM


An adventurer
in disguise
An artist
behind brooding eyes
A poet
of awesome dimensions
A romantic
with honorable intentions
A cynic
with incredibly soft edges
Big hearted man
who cleverly hedges
Honest
one who prefers to cry alone
Comfortable as cotton
making anyone feel at home
Powerful
though down-played for a reason
A firm believer
of things due in their season
Sensual
stroking my heart & my mind
Beautiful
no greater jewel can one find
Brown eyed man
of whom I am fond
May our hearts in friendship
forge
an unbreakable bond...

~Tier{R.T.}




© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-07 04:16 PM


hang onto this person!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-05-07 04:16 PM


You got it all right except the color of the eyes  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-05-07 04:18 PM


lovely, absolutely lovely!    SEA
Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-05-07 04:19 PM




I'll keep that in mind, Rose, *chuckles*

Interloper, It must have been the stars in my eyes... *wink*

Thank you, SEA! *hugs*

~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-07-2001).]

snowpants
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5 posted 2001-05-07 09:17 PM


Hey, Tier...this is just fantastic...had me captivated right up to the end...great flow!  I love it!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

RMW
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6 posted 2001-05-07 10:27 PM


Applause.
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-05-07 11:19 PM


Tiersdin~
Just a marvelous piece of friendship on display.

I especially enjoyed -
'A cynic
with incredibly soft edges'

Sounds like a keeper !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Parker
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8 posted 2001-05-08 09:52 AM


More lovely sentiments I never heard. Very nice.  

Parker

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2001-05-08 10:04 AM



Thank you, Snowpants, I'm glad that you liked! *smiles*

Robere: And well you should applaud!(teasing)

Awww, Margie, you just say the nicest things! *shucks*

Give it time, Parker, someone will say wonderful things about you! I'm sure of it!

*smiles*

~Tier


[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-08-2001).]

Sven
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10 posted 2001-05-09 07:52 PM


Tier, this is wonderful. . . indeed, never let this person go. . .

you do speak of him well. . .  

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
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11 posted 2001-05-09 08:06 PM


And the link to your fan club would be?  I enjoy the way you write.
Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2001-05-09 08:22 PM


I'm a bit jealous (spelled it right?)
Titia

Tiersdin
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13 posted 2001-05-09 08:40 PM


The man spoken about is this poem is a wonderful person indeed. *smiles* Thank you for commenting, Sven!

JLR, The minute I start one, I'll let you know and...I'd have to say that the feeling is mutual! *smiles*  

Titia, nice to meet you. No need to be jealous (and yes, you did spell it correctly *tee-hee*) someday, when you least expect it...  *chuckles*

~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-09-2001).]

Saunni
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14 posted 2001-05-12 11:54 PM


This is truly beautiful! I loved this!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

latin passion
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15 posted 2001-05-13 12:07 PM


value your friendships! The true ones are rare.

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

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