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The Face of Wonder
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The Face of Wonder |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The face of wonder Walk among the hoary trees Set your mind to idle. Let your senses play the breeze Ease the tight of bridle. Make the trip from now till then Step beyond your duty Look at nature once again Gaze upon her beauty. Structure awe once more in glean And blend it with amend. Let conscience touch gentles green Attend the wondrous end. Float gently in fantasy Show confinement the door And lightly taste the verdant Savor life in the raw. Splay and sway in its ballet. Be a part of its bouquet. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in face of hoarfrost awaiting spring of green bud I am then reborn No, I don't know why, I just know that your post made for this response, and I thank you for it.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Structure awe once more in glean And blend it with amend. Let conscience touch gentles green Attend the wondrous end. Float gently in fantasy Show confinement the door And lightly taste the verdant Savor life in the raw. Splay and sway in its ballet. Be a part of its bouquet. ============================== ahh Sy ... I do so love looking at the world thru thy poetic eyes ... "Structure awe once more in glean And blend it with amend. Let conscience touch gentles green Attend the wondrous end." and what an amazing bouquet this verse gives off .. very very cool Sy. *walking barefoot in your mind again*  *winkiewinkie* Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling again...this was so soothing and healing...reminded me that soon the irises will be in bloom...thank you sy! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Ease the tight of bridle."... "Savor life in the raw." There is so much tension in life. Your words are always a sheer soothing pleasure to read. Wonderful write. Poeminister "The soul can split the sky in two, And let the face of God shine through." ~Millay [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes you really painted the wondrous nature and showed the beauty inside the breeze excellent as always. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ With the gorgeous sunshine we had today - savoring life in the raw would be reaaaaaal easy to do!  Soothing thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...watch out for Marge...she likes to savor the raw in any weather...I love your poem..did make me feel some happiness...thanks. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
To bloom amongst the bouquet - There could be no greater joy, Sy... Neat poem, my friend..  Waft every crest upon your destined sea. Embrace the Wave of Serendipity, Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy Refurl with sail for all eternity. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, What a treasure I found here, reality walk, let go and enjoy, I love it, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
having an optimistic day, Sy? Great! I love to blend with nature, too, except for when I can't find my ball |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is beautiful writing Seymour, just beautiful! It's done in the subtle style of beauty that you use so often....I really enjoyed the read. Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am jealous of your views...waiting for nature to take it's course and bring me what you see... ~Smiling ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy , For a moment there you almost had me seeing green ,instaed of all this confounded white ! Thanks for the lift ! Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful people that were kind enough to reply to this poem I say bless you and forgive me this once that I did not answer each in turn. *L* to all Sy |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I didn't see this poem until now! I love the journey you took me on, in such feeling, meter, and rhyme - there are few things that delight me as much as nature! Absolutely gorgeous! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful is the nature and your poem Liz |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sy, your words have a way of quelling all the discord of a cold winter's night. Thank you for such a graceful read. Michael |
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geneology New Member
since 2001-02-13
Posts 2 |
This really is a beautiful poem. It makes one feel fresh. geneology |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Seymour, a beautiful poem. I loved it. Can I ask a dumb question? What's a hoary tree? Dee [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 02-13-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've given us all a breath of spring... *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosemary, Thank you for the gorgeous. Elizabeth, Thanks for the read and comment. Micheal, Thanks for the read and wonderful words. Geneology, Beautiful comment Dee, Hoary means aged and venerable, thank you. Suthern, Thank you so much. |
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