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The Hand of the Poet. . .
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The Hand of the Poet. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The hand of the poet Tells many things. . . Life Love Passion Pain The hand of the poet Reveals many things. . . Mind Soul Heart Tears The hand of the poet Shares many things. . . Yearnings Feelings Desires Wishes The hand of the poet Tells many things Reveals many things Shares many things Take my hand. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Soooooo beautiful! So well written  Hey, how did you get your pic in there? Sauni |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful poem, Sven Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sven to take your hand would mean to be a richer person for sure...love you tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool Sven-gator perfect presentation and format creative and sincere work later-poet-hand-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
True heartfelt words you use here my friend. It is very true how well we can express our true feelings so easily through our pens. Marina< !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Take your hand? You bet! Wonderful piece, this... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Yes, so beautiful this one in its presentation and format... and to top it all the sentiments... great regards to you Sir Sven, Sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven....... You write like no other! Your words are like diamonds in a velvet sky........ Your talent is so appreciated.... Life is but a dream... so sleep easy... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderful poem Sven. I wait eagerly to see where your hand will lead us next. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You never cease to amaze me. This is perfect and beautiful. I loved the end, I'll gladly take your hand anyday. This is how we all feel when we read your romantic poetry  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely as per your usual Sven. I'm afraid the ladies are pushing and shoving to get to that hand though, be careful!  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
The romantic hand of a poet has penned this lovely verse ... beautiful Sven! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all again my friends. . . Wow. . . so many of you. . . I can only say that your words and your sentiments really mean a lot to me. . . and it always amazes me to read your responses. . . Thank you again. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This was indeed penned by the hand of a poet. Great work, as always. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Taking your hand would mean the full understanding of love and compassion, and know that it was from the heart. Your love shines in this one my friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Nice poem. Very well written. Poetry reveals much. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ The poet pens his heart - thank you for inviting us into yours. You are a gentle and loving spirit and it shows in every flow from your pen. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very creative format and subject Sven...really enjoyed the way you layed this one out...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
EagleOne, Cerenity, LW, Marge, and James. . . Thank you my friends for your wonderful responses. . . you have all spoken to me. . . Thank you again. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Melissa Honeybee directed me here... simple yet powerful call...i will take your hand and squeeze it tight and hopefully never let go... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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