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CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

0 posted 2000-08-11 01:34 PM

I'm alone again...
Exactly what I wanted.
My friends are death,
and all the wonderful things
That will never leave me.
Just little thrils and little smiles,
All the happiness I know how to keep.
You think I feel sad
From the watery blue worlds falling from my face,
Pieces of dreams I built, forever lost...
But I don't know if I feel anything anymore,
Except gentle touch,
And fading people around me.

SweetPoet17
Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 108

1 posted 2000-08-11 03:47 PM

I really can feel this poem, it was short but it brought back alot of memories to me, I really liked it.
-jessica-

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-08-11 11:13 PM

I could feel the depth of emotion in this piece. Well done.

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2000-08-11 11:56 PM

Your certainly not the only one feeling this, relax and try to make the best of life, thats all you can do.

,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

4 posted 2000-08-12 07:57 AM

sweetpoet17 : well it always brings memories to me that never really left

Marilyn: thanx,it does feel good to know that the meaning got thru

jeremydraul: It's nice to k now i'm not alone but it does take time to relax sometimes

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

5 posted 2002-07-27 10:39 AM

*sigh* Sad. I've so been there.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

6 posted 2006-09-12 10:25 PM

Arvil: Some of us are still there...

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

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